Since I apparently never did my post about my paper, I will comment about it here. In writing, I lack description. I don't like to be very elaborate or descriptive. I prefer to be straight to the point much like how I speak. This is bad in writing because the reader needs details and imagery in order to completely understand what it is I'm writing.
My writing probably has not improved since our first paper. I think if I write more drafts though it will help my writing. It allows me to get my ideas on paper first and then go back through and add details.
Since my last post i feel that my writing has improved. At least my preparation has. I now brainstorm on what I want to write about and make some sort of a rough outline. Rather than before, when I just sat down and typed. I usually have good ideas of what to write about its just that I need way to organize it cohesively in my papers.
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